"Mwen pa fou, men tout moun panse mwen fou.Lavi a fe anpil sans le mwen pran poz mwen fou. Tout moun respekte m le yo panse m fou. Yo pa vini bo mwen. Yo kite m anrepo. Si mwen te konnen sa, mwen te dwe pran nesans tou fou." Eske li bon Mandlay?

Anmwey!  Li bon wi.
Li sanble w'ap viv yon lavi tètanba.
Pafwa se sa ki fè sans :)

In the sentence "Yo pa vini bo mwen", did you mean "They don't come near me"?  If yes, then you should replace "bo" with "PRE", "TOU PRE", or "BÒ KOTE".  As you have it now, it can also mean "they don't come to kiss me".

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