will you be my man?

Will you be my man?
Eske ou vle devni nonm mwen?
or
Eske ou vle pou ou ta nonm mwen?

I think it my be easier to say the following two sentences in Creole↓
I want you to be my man.
Mwen vle pou ou ta nonm mwen.

I would like you to be my man.
Mwen ta renmen pou ou ta nonm mwen.

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