It is my heart's greatest desire to share in a small part of your beautiful village.

village? Be a part of the village or share in the village?
Pi gran dezi kè mwen se pou mwen fè yo ti pati nan bèl vilaj ou a.
and for the other one that you had asked about:
Mwen swete mwen ta kapap  fè yon pati nan vilaj sa ki satisfè ou si tèlman.
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